25.12.2016

Zwei Versionen eines Radfahrgedichts

Aus dem Heft »Ten Poems about Bicycles« der Candlestick Press (2009:2015) ein Gedicht von James Roderick Burns, Boy on a Bicycle:

A boy rides a bicycle before the first world war. He is eighteen,
almost nineteen – a man, really – and wears his new uniform with
pride. He is cycling along an embankment on the outskirts of a
small town. The sun is halfway towards noon, the wind tousling his
light brown hair; his pinkish lips are mouthing a music-hall ditty
under his sparse moustache. He is going to see a girl he used to know.

He has no idea he will be dead in a week, his legs thrown out the
wrong way under a snarl of barbed wire. Now he marvels at the
warmth of his muscles as the chain drives the wheels around.
Now his tongue tastes of mint and apples.


Ohne den Tod läse sichs so:

A boy is cycling along an embankment on the outskirts of a
small town. The sun is halfway towards noon, the wind tousling his
light brown hair; his pinkish lips are mouthing a music-hall ditty
under his sparse moustache. He is going to see a girl he used to know.

Now he marvels at the warmth of his muscles as the chain drives the wheels around.
Now his tongue tastes of mint and apples.